Questions to lead to improvement

11/8/2010

1. Is my theme clear?

2. Am I on the right path?

3. How can I make it stronger?

4. Does the flow of my story make sense?

5. Is there any information I should add?

6. Are there any parts that should be eliminated?

1 Comment

Jill Brown

11/9/2010 02:38:12 am

I really enjoyed reading this story. The way the ending was written was great. Your theme is very clear, but I would consider adding more information about her treatments. For instance, descirbe how difficult it was to get through or why did she make decision to get surgery over another round of chemo?

Questions to lead to improvement

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